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by Usha

person Mija
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm I am not a horse racing fan, but I find this fic really interesting and different, I cant wait to see how you potray Naruto in this and the interaction between him and Sasuke, because not only does he own his own horses I presume, he is also the jockey and knowing them both they have comptetive streaks and Sasuke probably wont be happy that Itachi is trying to recruit him lol, I like this alot and look foward to more soon, ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can certainly appreciate the way you are now addressing the topic of bloodlines traditionally, with racehorses, instead of with kekkei-genkai.

Great job.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Very original plot, I like it.

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