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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that madara sure was a psycho ^_^
schedule
April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will give you this, it was a good idea for a story. However you seemed to have rushed a lot, it would of been nicer to have more information at someparts. Also it needs a hell of a lot of editing.