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for Of Fox Grins and Mismatched Eyes

by ladygizarme

schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was FANTASTIC and I absolutely loved this story! It was just plain CUTE! I love this pairing and I hope you write many more stories on them...

THANKS:"D
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel like screaming this story's cuteness to the world! There was so many points where I wanted to yell, "AWWWWWW!!!!" but I'm in a very small personal room at the library and...well, you know. Excellent job! And yes, it was delicious!
person Foxy-Chan
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!!
person dustin
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so KAWAII!!!! both of your chapters were cute and i look forward to more!
Ja ne!
person Houseki
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WYNM Review:

This one was bittersweet. It's very sad, yet... the two understand each other enough to come to terms and sort it out. You know, I just thought of something... you like to keep Kakashi in the hospital >.> lol

Anyways, good job on breaking this down as much as you could! I know it was REALLY HARD for you... but it was still able to turn out into a nice lil ficlet ^__^

*hugs*

Nic
person Houseki
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TWTAMHI Review:

*giggles* this one was uber cute... kakashi was being all sneaky-like, not letting on his arms were all better... and oh lord.... his damn paper-cut of DOOM is love yo... he's such a drama queen XD

I love how the only way Naruto was able to break out of his stupor when he saw Kakashi's face for the first time was a stomach to growl... so like Naru -__- :P

Didn't Naru finally find out about the reasons behind the mask when Gaara was captured and Team 7 went to Suna to help? "Public service..." and all... very sad.

Gotta love all the indirect-kissing going on... and naru's "Ehhh?" with the chopsticks at the ramen stand.

lol I could go on and on about which parts I liked... sheesh.

Anywho... to sum it up... this one was really cute (and NO WHERE near 500 words XD) and I love the thanks before and after the meals/kisses.. very fun ^_^ It's something I can see myself saying -__- nfufufu

love ya tomotan!

Nic
person Gwenn
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing ! I loved both stories, they're well written and well developped, the characters' emotions seems realistic. Good job !

If you feel inspired, I would love to read a story with an agressive!Naruto and a shy/inexperienced!Kakashi. A lemon would be great but I'm not picky, if you feel inspired by that I'll be the happiest girl ! I love Naruto/Kakashi (I prefer kakashi as the uke but it depends on the way it's written ;) )

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