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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the intro or rather the first chapter was good explaining all and bringing us current of the past. I agree that it felt like the chapter didnt know where it was headed, but now that we have this second chapter the pieces have fallen into place. I think u do so well with descriptions of feelings and their emotions (that might be redundant-sorry). I enjoyed reading this and am interested in how Itachi might become himself again. Also, how the rift between the two once best friends will play out. Great story and I look forward to the next chapter.:D