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by eternalshiva

schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, fun reactions :P I look forward to your future chapters
person hzleys87
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. It's compelling and lovely, and I do hope you'll keep updating it.
person Harmony
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this.... @_@ look forward to when you will get back to it... and I'm hoping it is not too terribly long... ^^ good luck with your writers block.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cliché...? Perhaps...

Interesting...? Absolutely! ^_^
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is a nice change of pace from Twice Shy. I know what you mean when your muse one story leaves you and in comes another. Been there, done that, got the T-shirt. :D
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Entertaining and innovative, keep it up!
person Ev
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! The details are so well thought out! I think I have a new obssession - please try to update on a fairly regular basis so I have an inkling of when to check back please??? Even if its every 3 months...

I would offer to be you beta - but I see nothing worth mentioning; you're doing a great job. Besides, my Laptop was stolen and I'm in the process of getting a better one - just need to save up one more paycheck (oops- TMI, cho well!).

Take care!
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! If she doesn't remember Naruto then this means she just gets to fall in love with him all over again! ^^

Keep up the good work!
person PnKnG
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice^^
Like it so far. Looking forward for more.
And Sakura better keeps her hand of Hinata's man *insert Gendo Ikari pose with hand in front of his mouth*
Also wanna know more about how Hinata end up being like she is now on your fic.
^^

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