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for Angry Angel

by Jelp

person moodysavage
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this : ) A really hurt & devastated Naruto and an emotional & equally hurt Sasuke...shows how much they love each other. And it was all a misunderstanding. Gotta' love those happy endings.
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really, really good!
I assumed, based on the lyrics of the song, and then you turn it on me!
I'm once again deeply impressed with your writing, and plot.
Brilliant story, in a sad, depressed, bitter, way..
Thank you ^^
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so beautifully written! It made me cry! I just KNEW there was more to what happened than what Naruto thought he saw, and I was so happy when it turned out I was right! (even though I didn't guess exactly what was really going on ^^)

I still have tears in my eyes. That last scene.. just.. guhh. And both times Sasuke's intimate embrace of Naruto from behind were mention just... made me melt. &hearts&hearts&hearts
person macy
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww..that was really sweet :)
person Briryan
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story:-)
person blueh
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Sui a stalker? Would've never guessed.
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, starting this out to the middle my heart was clenched in my chest. I could barely breathe when Sasuke first pinned him and started crying. *sighs contently* I love the angst factor, it was amazing *hearts*

I loved how they could both work things out without leaving a big mess, it was just perfect. A little too happy for my tastes XD But I still enjoyed it very much.

Thanks so much for posting this :)
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! The song fit so perfectly and it was very catching. Epic win! One of the best song-fics I have ever read before.
person Rachel
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I love all of your works,(Caution: Slippery When Wet has to be one of my favorite one-shots), I realize I really do not like a weepy Sasuke. I didn't feel he was portrayed well in this story. I don't mind when he shows his emotions, but I felt in didn't suit him in this story? I don't know, I am bad at reviewing, whether on a positive or negative note. I can't give you much constructive criticism from my point of view when I can't get my point across, can I? Anyways, keep writing girl! Can't wait for an update on Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!
person Aryia123
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see from you again! It's been a while since you last updated something, and I missed you. ]:

I love how tragic you make you stories <3
An angst story is exactly what I needed, I haven't seen one in a while. I completely loved this and was really pleased with the plot.

Also, you've gotten me back into Imogen Heap. I used to listen to her a couple of years ago but forgot to check any of her other stuff out, and I love Angry Angel.

Very well done to you, have a cookie. :D <33

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