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by butcherboy

person Deadlyteardrops (too lazy to login)
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far, I like the way you write out Naruto's pov.
Keep up with the Good work~!

ta ta~!!

Deadly Teardrops
person Kerrisa
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol!! That last part was funny xD I guess i'd be worried too if someone answered their door with a butcher knife in hand! I liked the little comments Naruto added here and there, like when it was mentioned everyday at 11:45 before lunch Sasuke would enter the bathroom but what he did in there was unknown, then Naruto commented that it might be to use the toilet. Lol i think that might be the reason too xD I'm interested why Sasuke is acting so strangely around Naruto. He fled for heaven's sake! Uchihas aren't suppose to flee! I hope you continue this, I'm so interested =)

XOXOXs ~Kei-Chan

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