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by KageKitsuneXXX

person shinigami
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
After reading the end of 13. I shouted "in your face Sasuke!" I'm so glad Naruto is giving him hell. I love to see a suffering Sasuke. An awesome chapter, please keep up the great work!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My heart broke into a gazillion peices while reading the last line! So sad. Please update soon ^^
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an achingly beautiful chapter! My heart bleeds for both of them, but I'm growling at Neji!!!!
Back off, Naruto and Sasuke belong to each other, go find someone else...
I patiently await the next chapter this story is truly brilliant!!!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Sai's puppy was hilarious and I'm proud of Neji! And Naru-chan!!! Way to step up your game!!! I cheered for joy and woke up a child for his nap. I can't wait to see more!
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can I reiterate how happy I am that Naruto didn't meet Sasuke? I understand they have this amazing love but when Sasuke wants Naruto as his lil dirty secret, it's just horrid. Btw I can't wait till they both find out about what Sakura did to trap Sasuke.

Love this story but so heartwrenching at the same time. Love Neji in this chapter! :D Esp his unconscious propositioning of Naruto! XD
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! CHAPTER 13 WAS A TOTAL TEASE.
WHY MUST YOU TAUNT ME SO!??!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?
person Dorkchic
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its like watching a 15 car pileup in slow motion. Lots of pain san suffering, but completely unable to look away.
person richon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
waoh !! I enjoy reading your stroy, i love it. i like the end, I imagine the face of sasuke and his emotion , he must be devasted but he is the one to blame. i am looking forward the next chapter
person lividangel
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"It's a puppy!"
oh bless you!

oh the gangs all showing up:)

Neji is delightful.
but poor Sasuke, I have a thing for tortured idiots.
I believe this is your most tortured one yet!
(so do thing Sasuke will drunkenly dream he's Ava Braun?)
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! Rejected!!! GAAH! Poor Sasuke.... My inner-macabre was hoping Sasuke would threaten to committ suicide just so Naruto would go see him xD I've got issues. Anyway, I hope Kakashi intervenes some more because reading about him pissing Sasuke off is hilarious!! Man.... I just love this ficcy!! I must admit I am missing some well-written smut xD I hope they get back together soon so I can get reaquainted with my pervself. Cant wait to read more regardless. The storyline sates me all by itself :D
~Cianis

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