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for Broke Straight Guys

by KaraMayonakaSora

schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo totally happy to see an update for this, even though its only a side story(cries). I do hope to see our main fic very soon, but until then...
Ja~
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Too funny. Yeah, Sasuke would definitely have to bottom. :D

Although Naruto's in a relationship now!!! He can't do porn!! >:/
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read this on ff.net yet, so I thought I would review it here. That last chapter was GREAT! Sasuke is a twink who doesn't know it--I'm not sure he can get more pathetic than that. Serves him right for insulting Gaara! I hope Bee mangles the bitchy twink!

LOL I love this story.
person Lil-lo
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your writing! It was funny, interesting and endearing to see Gaara in such a sweet mode. I really loved Naruto's denial and knowing that Sasuke not only sold him out for a game but sent him to this shoot. I even enjoyed the lemons because they flowed so well.
person Lil_lo
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention Sai...he was my 1st lol. But on to this chapter I think what I like about your work is that you have a real life skip the stereotypes take on writing about Gaara and Naruto. I am not as familiar so seeing Gaara break up misconceptions is educating in a fun way. I think it seems kinda natural (and funny) for Naruto to bust somebody in the face for the sake of his friends,and that's why you keep straying there.Sasuke and Kiba are a beautiful mess, and neither have really arrived! Last, Haku was a doozy! I thought Haku was going to be a boy,so being trans gendered was a twist.
person Lil-lo
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I learned 2 new things-the bashing reggae song and the Dorthy phrase (granted I don't feel like googling it even though I did google the gay mafia) The gym was interesting though I would be scared if anyone tried to caveman anyone in real life like they did Gaara. Sasuke and Naruto arguing was a hoot.
person zimmrie kanoah
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg i think i peed a little i laughed so hard. freakin sasuke is such a douche bag but i love it cuz hes one in a lovable kind of way. lol i dont think that makes sense but oh well.
so i totally fainted when i saw your update. yesh! thanks for comforting me. Bee and gaara together is so dang awesome if they end up not together... sniff but its a great story either way so i'll be happy. and no its not bad cuz your side stories are great. XDD
person Carousel
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 was bloody hilarious! XD This story is the most amazing fanfiction to have ever existed.
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Gaara and KillerBee are so cute. Kinda doesn't make me want to want Gaara and Naruto to get back together.
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
okay so i finally read this and well i love it. and omfg i laughed until i peed at some parts exspecially the phone sex messages left by sasuke about food on gaara's voice mail... gawd im laughing all over again! bwahahaha!!! i love it so much. its totally something sasuke would do in my opinion. fuckin prick that he is. and the sasuneji thing holy jeeze that was brilliant too. i hope to see an update very soon. oh and i never thought of the two together before but BeeGaa is awesome... i wants them to stay together forever. sniff... if bee's heart gets to broken or is broken... i will soooo saaaaad....
well i guess i should go. seriously... update... i loves it. i love you. lol

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