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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i for one would love to see this made into a plot tale but at the same time it works just the way it is right now if you make it a plot tale make it happen a few months after this tale
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Freaking hot.
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am totally up for a plot on this. If you made a story out of this it would make me very, very happy...
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this storyline and i also cant resist when Naruto's in charge of Sasuke.:D Seeing Sasuke as a slightly
incompetent guy is always fun. I can't wait for the next chapter and what Naruto has him do next. Konohamaru was also cute with a gun in this. Is he another agent Sasuke didnt know about or just a random kid Naruto knows?:)
incompetent guy is always fun. I can't wait for the next chapter and what Naruto has him do next. Konohamaru was also cute with a gun in this. Is he another agent Sasuke didnt know about or just a random kid Naruto knows?:)
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far! Can't wait to see more chapters!
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL Naruto has fucking issues in this, damn. :D
I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work!
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love me a forceful Naruto, and how hilarious is it that the Uchiha has to walk himself to the bathroom with wood inside a Federal building full of other agents???? I just thought that was great...No NO that's not a hard on that's just my gun...poor thing.
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice job so far....such a swap around to see a quieter Sasuke and a Naruto willing ot get into his face like that.
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this fic is going. I love cop fics. Keep up the good work! :)