rate_review Reviews

Ah, love this! It is delicious, and I love your details - Kakashi's arm muscles tense when he's gripping the sheets, his leg wrappings in the dark, and the sweat - I really like that, because they're both trying to hold back at least a little, them being who they are - but their bodies are sooo into it :D Really like the way Sasuke realized Kakashi must have been thinking about that happening - and how Kakashi came all the way across the village :D

And I see you've updated Entropy - I've got some reading to do, yay!

You managed to keep them in character, layer some depth into their interactions, and add in little splashes of precise imagery that didn't interrupt the story telling. Nicely done, I especially love the very raw, passionate portrayal you have of Kakashi.

This was a great story. The way you wrote it made it seem very intimate, and I liked that. =]