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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how you portray Sai going through his emotions. It's really amazing to see, really heart felt. It's like you're painting a great picture on a blank slate(and we all know how blank Sai is >.<).
The prank he pulled was epic. I can't wait to see more. I like how Mairen would only speak to Sai.
I'll be waiting for more ;)
The prank he pulled was epic. I can't wait to see more. I like how Mairen would only speak to Sai.
I'll be waiting for more ;)
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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story - full of emotions and family bonds. I can't wait to read more~!
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great. A very good base to start from. I love how Gaara is with the kids, makes me giggle. Uncle Sai that was a great one. Sai is a hard charactor to right but I think you got his awkward speaking pattern and his over all uniqueness down. But I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. *huggles back*
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen a Sai/Gaara fic and this one seems to be rather amazing for such a small beginning. Looking forward to seeing it come together and where it all leads, what with that emotionally charged prologue and first chapter. And those Temari-Shikamaru kiddos were absolutely adorable!
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It really takes children to help you find your heart. Especially in Sai's case, that little girl is just chipping away at his barrier :) She really has a Temari attitude lol
You write a perfect Sai, very perfect imo (do you know him personally rofl jk ^_^)
You write a perfect Sai, very perfect imo (do you know him personally rofl jk ^_^)
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad. Never seen the pair before. Interesting beginning, I'll until forever to see the next chapter :)
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! So beautiful. I could feel the pain coming off of Gaara. I can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon. :)