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for Tales in Tarrasade

by mannahpierce

person Rebelghost85
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lee's story so far is so sad. I hope he does better in the future.
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
best, pairing, ever! i love that last chapter
person richon
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
en san and in san are a part of the crew and they may have found a loer, haku did wonderful things like always is good to care for people, see you soon with part two!!!
person satterb
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, and very hot! Thanks for all the hard work!
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok. i havent reviewed any of the side stories (i dont think?)but this one was a omg moment. not a loud omg but a very small whisper, use ur inside voice, omg. i dont really read any erotic stories about zetsu cause i dont think he's attractive but jesus christ u made this hot. the faact that u described it so well so much details. just wow.
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WTH?! Their very first day as crew and that's the reception they get?!

They should have sworn to Uchiha a long time ago!
person v
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
uh...wow...after I regained the power of speech from that chapter..cause WOW!!Tatsugi is damn hot!!! I realized...I still know nothing about him, except that In-chan and En-chan had a very lovely time with him :) This is like a subtle cliffhanger, what exactly is going on his head..besides the obvious "i'm gonna get me some of that"...and I wonder how Kakashi handled that!!! *giggles* love it much, thanks :)
person cynaga
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 17] Exquisite~!
person angelj232000
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so nice. I am so glad all 3 of them found each other. It was cute the was the kids brought them together. Can't wait for part 2. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!
person roro237
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I went to Iteration first and seen this is before so I came here to read first:) WoW wOw WOW! The famous e-machine! That's how it works:) I didn't remember how Tatsuji looked?! Now I won't forget:) I can't even image writing two people in one having sex with the different feeling they were both having! ~Bowing~ You are truly amazing! I found that a very sexy threesome:)

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