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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really nice beginning!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want more now! You made it agonizingly shor and I want to read more! I hate cliffys but I love this story!
So please write fast! And make sure somebody kills the council! And make sure to put it in the story! Make it Gorrey!
Anyways I loooooov you're story so please please continue it!
So please write fast! And make sure somebody kills the council! And make sure to put it in the story! Make it Gorrey!
Anyways I loooooov you're story so please please continue it!
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic has a lot of potential! I'm interested in reading more =) There were some grammatical/spelling errors though, and they do take away from the story, especially when you're really getting into it, so make sure you proofread and revise. ^ ^