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July 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story. I'm sad that isn't finished.
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July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More! More more more more more more more!!! I don't care how many years it has been! Talent for writing doesn't fade that quickly! I wanna be there when Iruka clicks that Kakashi has been dipping into headspace! I wanna be there when he gets all choked up cause Kakashi has no one to bring him out of it! I wanna know Iruka's thoughts on Kakashi and Minato's relationship! I wanna see Genma support Iruka through what he has done and what he needs to do now! PLZ! I NEED CLOSURE!
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December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Stil no update/ I finally concede that it has been abandoned :(
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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, reading through this fic, I find myself quite enjoying it. I like that you're not rushing to create an intimate bond between them and that their dark places aren't suddenly all better now that they are more aware of each other. I'm usually pretty wary of fics with these themes since they're usually not usually done very well, or at least has an unrealistic taste to it. But this one works for me. I'm looking forward to any more you release.
Regards,
Kobayashi Shiki.
Regards,
Kobayashi Shiki.
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since we have heard from you, I hope you are doing okay. All of your stories are amazing and very well thought out. I hope you update them soon, or at least give us word of what's going on with you.
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is good. i wanna know what will happen between iruka and kakashi so please update more soon
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, no lie, I almost cried at the end of the last chapter. I suppose on one hand it's cathartic, but on the other, it opens up so many questions for Iruka; about his control, about Kakashi's strange behavior and mental state, about how he's going to get past this...
On the other side is Kakashi's relationship with his village. I really hope Hana manages to keep the use of her hands; more, I hope Kakashi goes and talks to her and the other children. It'd be good for all of them.
And of course, what is Tsunade thinking about? Anyway, I hope to see this updated sometime in the future: it's a lovely story that I'd like to see the end of.
On the other side is Kakashi's relationship with his village. I really hope Hana manages to keep the use of her hands; more, I hope Kakashi goes and talks to her and the other children. It'd be good for all of them.
And of course, what is Tsunade thinking about? Anyway, I hope to see this updated sometime in the future: it's a lovely story that I'd like to see the end of.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are you dead? You've got like three or four stories I'm anxious over!!!! Me love your work. Come back. *sobs*
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was a amazing...very powerful Awesome job. Can't wait to see what happen next.
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah!
You call _this_ a catharsis?
Well, I give you this, from Kakashi's perspective, it definitely is (and it made cold shudders run down my back, it was so powerful). But from Iruka's perspective... that left me in a knot tenser than anything else.
The only thing that didn't quite make sense to me was, why Kakashi stayed at home. I mean, yeah, not being able to face Iruka and all, that's understandable, but I would have thought that Kakashi had a bit more sense than letting personal problems interfere with the village's reputation. And you can't tell me that he simply _forgot_, because he had been tearing himself apart for the past week to make sure the performance went over well. Or did he simply tell himself that, since he wasn't an Academy instructor, his presence wasn't necessary?
Whatever. The whole chapter was horrible and painful (_not_ your writing skills, definitely not those, I'm talking about the gut-wrenching pain inside Kakashi and the horror of having a child blow her _hands_ apart), and the vulcano finally erupted. I'm so looking forward to how you're going to resolve this!
Sakiku
You call _this_ a catharsis?
Well, I give you this, from Kakashi's perspective, it definitely is (and it made cold shudders run down my back, it was so powerful). But from Iruka's perspective... that left me in a knot tenser than anything else.
The only thing that didn't quite make sense to me was, why Kakashi stayed at home. I mean, yeah, not being able to face Iruka and all, that's understandable, but I would have thought that Kakashi had a bit more sense than letting personal problems interfere with the village's reputation. And you can't tell me that he simply _forgot_, because he had been tearing himself apart for the past week to make sure the performance went over well. Or did he simply tell himself that, since he wasn't an Academy instructor, his presence wasn't necessary?
Whatever. The whole chapter was horrible and painful (_not_ your writing skills, definitely not those, I'm talking about the gut-wrenching pain inside Kakashi and the horror of having a child blow her _hands_ apart), and the vulcano finally erupted. I'm so looking forward to how you're going to resolve this!
Sakiku