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by Darkprism

person qwerty
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh they're so cute together! I can't wait to see how this will all unfold.
Great chapter!!
person paintedshadows
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter that leaves me awaiting the next eagerly, I do love your Itachi and well all of your works. Keep it up :)
person foreploy
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(chp 9) Oh my god, your Itachi is is... it's what I always imagined Itachi SHOULD be. I love his personality and interaction with Kimi. Your characters are all so believable. I'm on the edge of my seat for when he meets Haku. I want it to work out, but at the same time... it'd seem TOO perfect ya know? Man, I should shoot myself for not wanting a happy ending. >< I DO THOUGH. =D I love your work, I adore you, write forever you beautiful piece of authory goodness.
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"That blond child attached to his ass?" LOL

I resent that on Naruto's behalf.
person qwerty
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was perfect. Ahh I love this story sooo much. You give your characters such depth! Great job!
Keep going!
person cynaga
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“And given your circumstances, I humbly ask that you permit me to meet your Haku.” ~ YES!!!!


Exquisitely sexy... Kimi is strong and completely submissive at once. Lovely.
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, holy Jiminy Cricket!

Make him do that back-bend thing again.
person Carousel
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're soooooo sneaky! You had me thinking it wouldn't be Itachi. It makes sense that Itachi is a switch though. Brilliant, amazing job as usual. <3

Please let Itaci want Haku too.
person Brigette
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In the time between chapters I have been hoping and praying that the "Unknown Master" would, in fact, be Itachi. I had it narrowed down to him or Orochimaru. It would have been a little creepy, even though I hept telling myself that you could make anything beautiful. Thank-You for fulfilling my fantasy of who should love Kimi! Here's to hoping he can love Haku as well.
person Abbyrose
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story keep up the awesome writing...Kimimaro's secretive Dom was exactly who I thought it was, love it! :)

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