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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is quite good ^^ I like how the identity of the guy wasn't given, leaving it open to the reader.
However, I think the summary is slightly misleading and contradicting: eg 'NoSex' doesn't really fit it that well considering the lemon taking up most of it, and it's listed right by 'S&M' (which is also not included). You might want to fix that, but otherwise it's good =)
However, I think the summary is slightly misleading and contradicting: eg 'NoSex' doesn't really fit it that well considering the lemon taking up most of it, and it's listed right by 'S&M' (which is also not included). You might want to fix that, but otherwise it's good =)