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for The Mating Dance

by AngelTalion

schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this fic! ^^
Are you writing a sequel to this by any chance? If so id be honoured to read it. If you are still looking for a beta or need a beta anytime please contact me at alicewinter09@gmail.com . Sequel pleasepleaseplease <^_~.>
person ifXY
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
IIII freaking loved it! x]

Woman, i love you for writing such inspiring fics. I should kidnap and u and have as my muse just for that. :P

haha, just kidding xD i'm sure u'd do well just where u are, and u are!

please keep on writing amazing bits like these in the future xD
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i was loving this until the inuyasha mix in but its still a good story
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
muhahahaha gotta love a S/I/N pairing. naruto in between two Uchihas is nothing short of pure hotness. an ukefied naruto just turns the heat up to major smexiness.
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As adamant as I was on Sasuke, I suppose I can live with the fact that you went with SIN. At least Sasuke got to go first!!!! That made me happy.
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for giving us both brothers. It was a really delectable treat. It was very hot and carnal, I enjoyed it.~melts~
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The end? The end? Wait... there's still Itachi's question left! Epilogue epilogue (singing & doing a little dance) I sense an epilogue. Besides, we HAVE to see how Kakashi passes the right to protect Naruto over to the Uchiha's AND how Sasuke & Itachi react to Kakashi & ESPECIALLY Kiba since they know Naruto has slept with them. And uh...mentioned Kiba while they were...ahem mating. I imagine it's a good thing Kiba is dating someone or they MIGHT have wanted to pound him a bit. lol This was just so awesome!!! Thanks!!!
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more chapters or is this it.
person roro237
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wOw! I can't stop reading!! I'll write you later:)
person roro237
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! WoW! I didn't see that coming. I liked that Itachi didn't have to die.(1) Kakashi and Kiba you naughty girl:)(2) The Lord of the Dog Clan Sesshomaru loved it:) I love Inuyasha to.(3) Both Uchiha brother icing on the cake:) Those three things were great in this story! ^_^

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