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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I was reading your story and I really like it :) I was wondering if you would want to make Kyuubi and Itachi get together with Itachi as the uke. Maybe them he won't be as tense. It's just a suggestion. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry so much about your spelling and grammer. the longer you keep writing, the better your grammer becomes. Trust me I was really terrible at grammer, but I've gotten better. Anyway, I love your story. It's really interesting. I really like the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the good work.
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, ain't they both seriously messed up. Good grief, drama galore.
I feel super sorry for the therepist.
I feel super sorry for the therepist.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha, this last chapter made me smile and laugh out loud! Definitely want to see how this therapy progresses, hehe.
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well ouch, so what happened to Kyubii and who sired him?
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know that chapter one was supposed to be a prologue of sorts, just explaining the pasts of the people in the fan fiction, but why did it have to be in total italics? I kind of find that unnecessary. Other than that, I like this story line so far.
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May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Don't worry about the grammar. You have a good plot and character development which can be a lot more scarce lol. I wonder about the Kyuubi storyline though... is his rapist dad somehow involved in what happened with Itachi? Don't tell me! I like to be surprised.:)