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for A Chibi Story

by AngelTalion

person babe
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CUTE! wanna read more please.
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol ooh this is gonna get interesting. shikamaru and sasuke fighting over naruto? lmao!!!!
schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are flippin' writing Machine! I have to see wherever your mind lands this one cuz I'm in stitches waiting for more.
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this please write more I NEED MORE!!!! LOL.
person Althydia
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww... nice start! You already had me with the title, but the story looks very promising too (and cute, of course!).
Not all couples seem completely defined, and some hints were a bit of a surprise, so I'm looking forward to finding what you'll decide about this. The fact that they have some memories and teenager aspects in children's bodies adds a touch of ambiguity too. Also, do the orphans all have to go to separate places? Wouldn't it be easier to find a common place to keep in eye on them all? Plus, I don't think Sasuke would let Naruto out of his sight anyway (particularly if there's some competition for him). ;)
person Ryu Earth
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute! Loved the fight between Shikamaru and Sasuke over Naruto, but Kakashi made a mistake! He should be going with Iruka... ^^;;
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I'm going to Love reading this one!! I'm glad my Neji is still an adult although it would've been adorable to see him as a chibi too.:3. I can't wait to read what happened to them.
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i love them as chibis. update soon, please =)
person cynaga
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
delightful idea - can't wait for more!
person Kalypso
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it. So cute chibi's are my favorite. Can't wait for more or see what you come up with. :)

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