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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the setting and the circumstances, and found your story to be both hot and humorous.
There are, however, a lot of grammatical errors that could be corrected.
All in all, a pretty good story though. ^^
There are, however, a lot of grammatical errors that could be corrected.
All in all, a pretty good story though. ^^
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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well Played.
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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanx