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by mannahpierce

person toosweet05
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great continuation from the stories. I am sorry to see that it is only going to be 11 chapters long, but I still love reading any story that you write. You are an awesome writer.
person satterb
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've always loved Haru chan! I can't wait to see more of this story. I'd missed you while you were away. Thanks for sharing more of this wonderful universe with us.
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aws, you made Sai for Sumiko :) So lovely!
And now it fits that he doesn't have a name x)
person mikoto-chan
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love your stories!!!!! I'm happy you are back ... I'm horrible at reviews but I will try to do it more from now on :)
person Lonelylulaby
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is AWESOME!!!!!!! Omgoodness 11 ch all in Haru's point of view, cool. The sex talk was funny and sad, I hope none of the kits get attached to someone that doesn't love them. Poor Haru, to be left behind is not a good feeling even if your use to it, I hope he really does catch up. Will anyone ever know of Naruto's childhood?

Ja ne till next time and I can't wait till Wednesday
person morlana
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haru is growing up and I believe he would have a greater understanding of things and with his propensity towards needing to know the root he will more than likely find out a lot of distasteful things before the others. I wonder if he will approach Iruka and Naruto about their sexual experiences, if so I'm sure he'll protect the others about the knowledge of their To Chan having a rough childhood. And Sumiko she is coming into her own, wonder why Shika is ignoring her potential to be as much of a type genius as he or Haru is? Well I always enjoy your stories so I can wait to find out. Happy New Years!
person richon
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haru had his sex talk, love the way sasu and naru talk about it. Sai srrm special but he is an imaginary friend, sumiko is happy. I am happy to know you have start the third part of the story.se you sonn ant happy new year!!
person roro237
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(Smiling) Sai huh I love it:) I hadn't thought about which way Haru might go but yes Ran's way:) I think that there has always been a bond there. This chapter was so sweet. Our little ones are growing up ^_^
person v
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, I had to read it twice *smile* I think I was worried after all his planning when his To-chan was injured that his brain would out pace his heart and he might become a little unpleasant but I think having Ran has helped balance that out a great deal. Sai is very interesting, I really am interested to know exactly how smart Sumiko is and if anyone has noticed? Perhaps Shika has been so worried about how to be a good parent and her acting out that he's forgotten how smart his father was? Also I think using the simulators to find out if the kits will have behaviors is wonderful, I had horrible thoughts about if they would attack each other if one of them went berserk and how Naruto would blame himself, such a relief :) As always, can't wait til the next chapter!
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL I have to wonder if there is anyone in all of Tarrasade who could sufficiently explain to Haru and the other kits what a clit is.

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