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person angelj232000
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was such a good side story. Can't wait for Leaders, I will be eagerly awaiting it. I will miss this universe while you are getting ready to release Leaders. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS!!! <3 Hope to be reading new stuff soon!!!!
person angelj232000
schedule January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying where this story is going. I hope they tell Shika & Sasuke about Sai. It very hard to lie to those you care about. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!! <3
schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn it! A clifhanger? Seriously? I didn't expect that... Now I'm curious! Ka-chan has some plan with Ran... I hope it's something smart... I hope they will finally take the weight of this whole situation from poor Haru's shoulders...

Next chapter is the last one, right? Too bad. I will misss it. On the ither hand this situation is stressing so it's good it will be over. I strongly believe that it only looks dangerous and scary in Haru's young mind. I think that he exgerates and makes it look like a monster in your closet that turnes out to be some abandoned piece of clothes... I hope it's just that. It's very interesting from his point of view but I hope it will turn outto be ... nothing scary.

Well, now I just have to wait till Wednesday...

THANK YOU for the update and for every moment Naruto and Kazuki appear.
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why didn't he confess to Naruto?! :-(
But I like the way the three boys are acting :-)
person Lonelylulaby
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haru needs to tell an adult and not hold all tis important info. Im glad that he has a friend like Ran because he's his conscience. This little story is almost over :( guess that means the big mamma is on the way. Oh man Sai is a character and I can't wait till he is introduced to the rest of the family. Wonder if Shika will be able to make him a body to walk around in or if he can hack planets. Too cool

Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this chappie had me in tears... Haru just isn't made to carry a load like that by himself and now he doesn't have to. i wonder if he should tell klenn. I have a feeling sai is going to play a major part in things in the future.
person Kyle
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uff, been sick so I've not been reading/reviewing but NOW I RETURN
I love how you write Haru.
You have a really good grasp of how kids think and you're very good at combining that with intelligence whilst still keeping him kidlike.

Also I claim I only got teary 'cause I'm siiick.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapters! Poor, poor Haru - feeling so stressed out over this and even having a falling out with Ran. Ah, I adore him <3 Cute child.
Naruto is awesome as always :)
I kind of feel as if we still weren't sure what Sai is though :)
person cynaga
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
[ch 10] *big smile*
person roro237
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Ha-chan can't lie to Ran. I'm so impressed with Ka-chan he's a very smart boy with friskier:) He always seen so hyper. No not hyper speedy is the word I was looking for:) To-chan wonderful as always. Thank you I enjoyed this 'Secret' very much ^_^

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