I really don't know if you are still checking this but I want you to know that I still read this story to this day.
I read it and re-read it. And it's a large part of what inspired me to write lemons at all.
It's hard to find your story and review it. Ficwad is in a terrible state and I don't think it's even registering new reviews. So don't be discouraged if it looks like nothing is coming in. I myself reviewed it over on ficwad but the reviews aren't accepted.
I love your work. I am deeply impressed that it never got boring. Than you very much.