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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!!Now they really have to find out he is innocent!!!! See you again!!!!
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please continue!
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sad beginning^^ I still think I want to read more, I don't know if I will change my mind^^ for now see you again soon!!!!
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good start but to stop there kinda sucks
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting but far too short. If you want to keep the readers interest you need to lengthen the chapter by quite a bit. probably at least 10x what they are now. But other than that I always like a naruto being betrayed fic so hopefully this pans out. Good Luck!
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the suspense is killing me
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O_O oooohhhhh nooooo NARUTO!!!!!! :( Please Sasuke, help Naruto!!!
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Who's baby is Sakura planning to abort?! O_0