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for It Started In An Elevator

by Daydreamer79

person lara5170
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was just cute.
person joe
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this was remarkably sweet, charming and entertaining_ but it reads like the beginning of a story- i hope you might consider adding more chaps.
i liked your characterizations of naruto and sasuke. their dialogs and the situations you gave them were well played out. i really enjoyed reading this. i liked the characters. i liked how naruto made sasuke a better man w/o even trying- i like how sasuke showed his appreciation by buying naruto dinner- getting him a job, etc....loved every little bit of the story___thanx 4 sharing with us
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First Naruto story I've felt like reading in forever. Very fun to read :)
person sadie237
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed! Naruto's humor in the beginning was great! Sasuke with a stray cat loved it:)
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why not more? You really have written some of my favorite stories and this is one of them even if it's lacking in the smut department. ^_^
person PhoenixInnocence
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, just wonderful. I loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. Any chance for a follow-up? This is one of those stories I'd just love to read more of.
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very adorable...I love it!
person Moon Whistler
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, it was great!
person clover
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Love how Sasuke stayed in character and is still manipulative even when being nice and all. Is it possible to request for a sequel or continuation?


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