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for Deception - COMPLETE

by kizukatana

person ishtani
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The story line is one of the best AU's I've ever read in any fandom. I'm always excited to see a new chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! LOVE IT!!! Hope you update soon!
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The pieces are falling into place. I love the little touches, especially the nonverbal communication that keeps going on. The scene where Naruto meets Shisui is a delight, and I am going to be very disappointed if Shikamaru doesn't get his Chekov's Gun fired (did that sound dirty? I merely refer to his business card). As aleays I am wildly impressed with the caliber of storytelling you display, but I think you keep getting more skilled with every chapter. And have I mentioned that I just love your versions of the characters, and the eay they interact? We have no need of Ukes here.
person CapriaStar
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You have a way of writing that is captivating. The development of the characters are complete and indepent of the anime, but still true to it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Lil JJ
schedule October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! Please make the next chapter ASAP!!!
schedule August 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*drooling* So good. So satisfying. You set the bar high.
person Melanie
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi kizukatana!

I've spent every day after work reading your story! There was something about it right from the beginning that I knew I loved. Everything from the tone to your writing style had me hooked and it hasn't disappointed me all throughout. I cannot wait for you to update!! Thank you so much for proving that there are still great writers like you. You're wonderful! Thank you thank you thank you :)

Melanie
person Rizu
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say how much I love your story, please never abandon it
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty much awesome. It took a couple of chapters for me to really get into it, but I can easily say I've been won over by the depth of the characters. You've put a lot of work into developing their histories and habits, and it shows. I'll be waiting for the next chapters!
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke can be an ass, but he wouldn't put little Naruto in the hospital. He's sure to know a doctor or two. I wonder if he'll call his brother though . . .

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