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July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, not many people on here actually bother to expand on the story's background. I can't waiting to see how you move the plot along, or how Naruto "deals" with Mebuki. Keep up the good work. :)
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July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Finally an author who managed the right balance between smut and plot! This is brilliant! Bravo sir!
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June 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. Fantastic writing all around save for some spelling errors, which are to be expected seeing as how many words you had in this single chapter. I wish I could write such amazing smut like you do.
Here's hoping to more!
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June 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very different than what I was expecting. Pleasantly surprised, great read looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have EVER read a better smut focused Naruto fanfiction.
Your writing is superb, the story flows excellently and the smut is detailed and fantastically well done.
Great job, truly!
I hope we get to see more of your work. If every story on this website was of the quality you write, it would be a much, much better place.
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May 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is great ( I can't wait for the third chapter. Btw for Konoha girls were you going to add Anko too?
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May 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
While kinda sad Anko won't be in it, I'll get over it. Any idea when next chapter will be out?
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May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I'm loving the story so far. The concept is rarely seen, and the scenes are written exquisitely. Can't wait to see more of this story in the near future.
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May 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This plot is amazing. I come for the porn, but stay for the plot. So glad you updated.
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May 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Stick with plot-lemons, it makes reading much more enjoyable, And pulls the reader in letting us know and feel what the characters feel. Though if this turns out to be a Harem fiction, can you stick with Naru-Saku as the main theme? Since so far it seems Sakura is unknowingly developing Stockholm syndrome with naruto out side of the genjutsu. I would like to see a few more chapter with just those two until the chunin exams.