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May 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me or does anyone else keep picturing Naruto as a kind of 'Star-Lord Chris Pratt' type of character?!? (who I totally love btw)
A couple typo's in the beginning- like... (Sasuke's hair stinking instead of sticking up) in paragraph 3. Nothing that really detracts from the story.
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May 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!!! Your story has substance to it and so does not have that PWP feel to it that I really try to avoid. Sexy Naruto and desperate and hesitant Sasuke are a good combination :)