rate_review Reviews

Holy crap!! That's hot. Anychance of you writing a sequel or prehaps a prequel on how they got together?

~Kira

Kawaii!!

A few grammar mistakes is this, but a really but one shot anyways.

Sugoi!!

That is the best piece of taboo literature that I have ever experienced.

I find myself re reading this over and over. It's such a wonderful confession of lust and love. Great job.

That was hot, sweet, and gives you a feeling of security all at the same time. I love how you put it in a new point of view. Good job, great work.

one word yummy

I would like you to know...that in my four years of reading fanfiction, year and a half of liking Naruto and year and four months of know about and reading this particular fanfiction, that this is by far the hottest, most arousing thing I have ever read. And I don't usually even like het couples! But when I first came across this...I think I almost fainted. This is such an awesome fic...the format, the PoV, the dirty, raunchy descriptions of rough, endless sex....everything, I love it. I am a lesbian yet this fic makes me want to find a big, strong man at least thirteen years older than me and go to town night and day (I'm 18) *laughs* In case not enough poeple have told you, this fic fucking rules. Amazing job.

-EoA

Oooh, very nice! I love the part about him wanting to ravish her in front of the boys. :D

first fic of this pairing i ever read and the first het i've read in a LONG while. it's really sensuously and well-written, it got mi interested in the pairing, but turns out this is the only great if no the best fic of this kind. i was actually wondering what roricon was when i first read this, but then i got thinking: roricon...shoutacon...loli from lolita^^ great job

::faints:: OMG! So good! So beautifully written as well! Very nice job! ^_^