rate_review Reviews

Nice story.

Wait is the storiy over or did you just run out of ideas? oh well It goes off my fav list on my computer. I guess the stories done and I've read it all so theres no point to come back to read the next chapter huh? oh well, and it was a good story too.

wah! finally, an update!

i kinda lost hope in reading this again, but you gave me a great new year's gift, thx! i loved the way naruto defended his village, and now, the village will have to acknowledge naruto for who he is, not what he is... that is, if he survives. although i can still see some villagers doubting him since he had to rely on the demon strength in the end and kinda lost it too... nonetheless, naruto was amazing - the demon that onced reaked havac on the village has now saved it.

update soon!

I really like your interpretation of naruto (as the sexy demi-god of death) and sa-chan (his angel). Can't wait for the next update.

The ending was sweet, and the whole chapter was great! I liked how you handled Sasuke's reaction to the news about Naruto, awesome job. Update soon, okay?

Fuck fuck fuck more more more, omg this story is so good, please write more.

Aren't you missing 2 chapters?
What happened to Chap 8 (I Can Only Imagine) and Chap 9 (Memories)?

I really like this story, and I've been following it for a while. I really hope you continue with it.

loving the story but when are u going to update

I really like this story, it has a sort of charm to it that just warms you up. A lot of fics tend to be angsty and mean (mean, as in the characters bully each other), but your fic has just the right touch of sadness with the touchy-feely parts in between so it doesn't leave the reader all depressed. Also, it's nice to see a story in which sasuke and naruto arent constantly being twats to eachother and where narutos not a sobbing emo uke.

I only have one complaint though; your writing, though it's still easy to understand, is a bit choppy in a lot of areas. Like this line for example:

"Workout cloths?" nodding Naruto gathering some fresh clothing from the closet, "I didn't mean
to disturb you Sasuke, you need you sleep."

Would work better as:

"Workout clothes?"

Nodding, Naruto gathered some fresh clothing from the closet. "I didn't mean to disturb you Sasuke; you need your sleep."

Or something like that. But yeah, great fic otherwise. And ouu, we're both from Canada. Nice.

OMG!! This is great! you have got to udate a lot more, life be damned!! just kidding, don't damn your life, but i would like to read so much more!! just to note though, you've got some grammar to work on, and try to use some commas too. otherwise, i'm in heaven when i read this!!