Icha Icha Paradise

Ok, this is not a chapter. I'm looking for a beta reader first. I'm just not happy with my story and I want someone to help me out on this one. If you're interested, please email me. Title the E-mail Help given so I don't just delete it and my email address is xXxGensomadenSaiyukixXx@hotmail.com. And please, I'm looking for a good and experienced Beta, not someone who just wants to try it. Its been ages since I've updated and I'm sure there are a lot of people who are pissed at me, but I'm just to angry with the story right now to let you see it. Infact, I contemplated taking what is already up down because I didn't like it. My storyline is fine, but I just cant stand the way its written. I guess to me it looks like my 10 year old cousin wrote it. I tend to be anal like that...

Please email me if your interested. I really need the help. Thanks.